No one could understand it. Why would Dr. Piper commit suicide in such a horrible way? And at the very moment of his professional triumph! The new comet was going to be named for him!
No one could understand, that was, until they started to clean up the charred remains of his office and found a page of his notes that had escaped the fire, singed at the edges but still legible:
“It has eyes. It looked back at me. It knows we’re here now. And it’s coming.”
damn good flash fiction
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Yikes. This would make a great movie.
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This is so good, I want to read more!!
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Reblogged this on Dreams of the Shining Horizon and commented:
My story is up at The Drabble! Isn’t that always the way? You keep checking for weeks, and it shows up just when you aren’t paying attention. But I’ve talked enough. Check it out!
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‘it has eyes’ part really surprised (and scared) me! great!
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Goose chills!!!
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Scaaaaary!
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Laid it on a bit thick at the end, but still very solid. Maybe just “It has eyes.” or “It looked back at me.”
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Quick, warn someone!
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