I feel no hollowness
no grief or pain
no sensation of something missing
the fabric is still intact
the universe has no hole in it
I have not lost a thing
he was already dead to me
Bio: A cancer survivor, Freya is inspired by the ocean, a variety of music and beautifully written books. She is the author of four novels and a poetry collection.
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thank you!
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Nice, Thanks.
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thank you for reading my poem!
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I feel ambivalence. Pain for the loss that isn’t acknowledged, but relief for the soul that can move past the grief & accept the loss Beautiful poetry.
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ambivalence is a good way to describe how I feel about this situation – thank you for reading!
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Wow. It’s astounding how not a lot of words can capture not just death, but of a final death where the world moves on from you. Great work! 🙂
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Thank you for reading! I love your interpretation of my words! xxx
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I appreciate my own shifting emotions reading so few words. I like when writers can create that effect in me.
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thank you for reading, JC. I am pleased you had an emotional response to my words! xxx
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Reblogged this on Dragonscale Clippings and commented:
at the weekend, my poem, Dead, was published by The Drabble! please let me know what you think, either here or at the original post!
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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thank you SO much for the re-blog!
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