“When they drop the bomb, there’ll be nothing left worth surviving for,” he said.
And then they dropped the bomb.
I couldn’t bring myself to gobble up the pills or drink the vodka he had provided. He had no such trouble. Halfway through the vodka, he told me a joke about a cross-eyed teacher who couldn’t control her pupils. I didn’t laugh; I just watched him die. I breathed and drank water. His flesh began to turn to moisture.
I climbed out of the hole he had dug, surveyed the scorched earth and went in search of other betrayed women
Good luck finding anyone else.
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What a stunning picture of the survivor mentality — great character.
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Nooooo, stay insideeeee.
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Incredible flash. So much done in a few words!
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Two kinds of people. Those who give in give up and those who live.
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Suicide, the ultimate betrayal. Good imagery supporting the storyline; for example, the hole he had dug is both the bomb shelter and his grave.
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I found myself likening this to the recent sexual abuse scandals. The metaphorical ‘bomb’ dropping and betrayed women.
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i love how you fit so much passion into such a tiny piece of prose
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Another selection from the Drabble archive. Enjoy.
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