By Penny Gadd
Jane treasured this time away from her daily routine.
She climbed the path briskly, skidding on pebbles left by the rain running through the scrub. The wind, and the bleakness, and the loneliness, scoured away the mask she’d worn during the day. Her face relaxed into a half-smile. She thought with tenderness of her children, without the distraction of needing to deal immediately with their problems.
It was her “me” time. She could be herself.
She reached the summit, glanced at her watch and sighed. It was time to go home. Time to go back to being “George” and “Daddy.”
The twist at the end caught me off guard, but I think that’s what makes this piece amazing. Great job!
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Dear Queen Ann
Thank you for your comment. I’m glad the twist surprised you!
With best wishes
Penny
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Reblogged this on Autumn Leaves and commented:
I’m absolutely thrilled! The Drabble has accepted my story “‘Me’ time”. This is my first publication by a third party.
A big thank you to The Drabble!
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Perfect example of a Drabble. Nice going.
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Dear Karen
Thank you for reading, and for your very kind comment.
With best wishes
Penny
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Fantastic twist at the end, Penny. Loved it.
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Dear Varad
Thank you for your lovely comment!
With best wishes
Penny
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One of my favorite stories of yours Penny 🙂
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Dear Dahlia,
I’m so glad you like it. Thank you for the lovely comment!
With best wishes
Penny
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Ah, I see what you did there! Caught me almost napping. Nice little twist. Thanks!
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Dear John
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment.
With best wishes
Penny
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