Another man’s woman is making me breakfast. She says it’s the reverse-supper she needs to make for her night-shift husband anyway.
She’s telling me something else, some story I’m meant to follow, but I’m not really listening.
I needed last night as much as she did.
I don’t feel sorry or wrong, exactly. I feel empty.
Steam rises from the pan next to her. She turns to stir the eggs and I wish I’d left ten minutes ago.
Coffee? No, thank you.
Honest and relatable. Captures the feelings in the moment.
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Thank you very much!
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I just discovered your blog. I’m enjoying these compact love taps you’ve written.
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Thanks so much, Harry!
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Certainly not eggs over easy in this one night stand.
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Never easy, but never all that over,either.
Thanks for reading and commenting, Kelvin.
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Reblogged this on and commented:
An early micro-fiction piece adapted for the wonderful site The Drabble.
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Love the opening line! Really captures the feeling right from the beginning and carries it through to a well written finish.
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