
The dunes are mostly gone now.
Remember how we played fetch
with my dog and you took a piece
of driftwood, etched “I love you” in sand?
We made love up in the dunes, the sun
on your back, a fire through me, lust
sprinkling down like a warm sea mist.
Once I watched as you swam, sleek as
a dolphin, body-surfed with new friends.
I called out, but you didn’t hear.
The dunes are mostly gone now …
washed away by time and tide.
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“I write to capture indelible moments in time.” – the writer
thanks to The Drabble for the beautiful photo with my poem!!
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I just love this poem. I keep going back to re-read it. Pretty soon I’ll have it memorized.
Thank you for this lovely work.
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Wow, thank you, Jane for your wonderful comment…it’s so fulfilling to know my words touched someone else. xx D
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nostalgic memories!
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You evoke a beautiful moment in time.
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Thank you, dear Lisa!
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You are very welcome dear sis
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Wonderful imagery and emotion.
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thank you,VJ
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Poignant and melancholic, but lovely. Time stops for no one…
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so true, Luccia….that’s why we need to appreciate each precious moment.
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