By Jade M. Wong
A chilly breeze plucked a white petal off the tulip sitting at the open window.
He loves me.
A second plucked petal floated with the breeze before coming to a rest on the damp soil.
He loves me not.
The flowerpot trembled as a stronger wind blew in, sending petals fluttering in the air.
He broke my heart.
A giant gust rushed in, flinging the flowerpot across the room, shattering the clay and showering the floor with soil.
So I’ll break everything he’s got.
Powerful writing!! Love the imagery and the escalation of the breeze to the giant gust
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Thanks! Glad you like the imagery and the escalation 🙂
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Amazing! Thanks for posting, I love how this is so effective in such a succinct space.
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Thank you! So glad you like the piece 🙂
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Thank you for sharing my piece, Drabble editors! 🙂
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Fab, Jade, as always! 🙂
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Aw shucks, thank you TUS 😀
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